I lie in the shadows and the darkness afraid to let go.
Even with everyone around me I still feel so miserable and alone.
I don't know how I got threw when time is at its end, and I have lost
everything I have ever come to love.
I set in the darkness and just fade away.
Becoming nothing but a memory lost in dreams of such pain.

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