Ok, I really need comments on this poem, I couldn't think of many other
words to rhyme that explained my feelings. Please let me know what you
think.
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What do I know?
What do I feel...everything for you is real.
My heart can't heal,
I don't know how to deal.

I loved you so much,
I only wanted your touch.
I'm holding on to this crutch.

I miss you now, more then before,
Please don't walk out that door,
I'm going to fall to the floor.

I can't take this loss,
its too much cost.

I want you back,
My love doesn't lack.

Tell me what you feel,
that you need me for real.

I can't cry,
and I still wonder why.

My tears won't come,
although you left me with some.

I don't know what I feel,
I hope one day I'll heal.
 
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