Oh dear
I’ve written a stinker.

No comments…

What was I thinking?

I thought it was fine
Had something to say
But maybe I missed the point.

Maybe it was my grammar.
Maybe not.
Maybe it was my spelling
Though probably not.

Was it my choice of words?
Who can say
(certainly nobody here)

Was it the rhythm
(maybe the blues)
Was it the flow
Or the lack of moves
Was it too simple
Or too tied up
Did it simply
Confuse you all
A comment would help
For I just don’t know…..

No comments...

I didn't think
It was that bad.


 
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